Another opinion against the idea is that most exams in children’s life are useless.
A)The main idea(expressing your opinion)
For example, some exams are like a “Record” a few days before the exam, then a “Play” during the exam and a “Delete” after the test.
B)Giving an example
It’s like only teaching students how to memorize, and there is not a real benefit in reality.
C) A supporting sentence to the given example
Thus, such kind of exams does not give anything useful for their future life.
D)New opinion+result
IV.MAIN BODY 3 (Alternative opinion+result)
On the other hand, some people believe that taking more exams is the best way to know the strong and weak points of the students in classes.
A)Alternative opinion(express an idea contrary to the previous)
Furthermore, they consider it to be the best motivation in encouraging them to go forward.
B) A supporting statement
One of the teachers at a school says that the more they study for the exams, the more they will achieve during this process.
C) Giving an example
So, almost all of them try hard to be the first among the best ones who has got the rewards.
D) Expressing the result
V. CONCLUSION
In conclusion, although exams give a chance to know the students achievement,
I believe that it really bores learners to require more results without more training.
No doubt, when classes are organized communicatively and there are more debates and free ideas in a group, it can also be regarded as some kind of test.
A) Generalizing(reminding the topic and your opinion)