you have not written 150 words, and you want to add some more words. Remember, you cannot use
‘PS’ in a formal letter.
Style
This candidate uses some good personal phrases for giving advice:
‘If I were you, I would join . . . I would also try to . . .’
Other ways to give personal advice are:
‘Maybe you could go . . .’
‘Have you tried to go . . .’
‘You could always go . . .’
‘It might be a good idea to go . . .’
Try to use these phrases, and not just ‘You should go . . .’ because they are more complex.
Saying ‘I suggest that you go . . .’ is too formal for a personal letter; it would be better to use this
phrase in a formal letter for the ‘suggesting’ content ideas.
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