EXAMPLES/ACTION
Task Response
I have fully addressed all
the parts of the task and done
everything I have been asked
to do.
Read the question
carefully.
Check that you have done
everything that you were
asked to do.
Coherence and
Cohesion
I have used cohesion so that
my description reads
smoothly
and is sequenced effectively.
I have used
paragraphing
effectively.
Use sequencing
vocabulary, e.g.,
first, next,
after that, finally, etc.
Use linking words/phrases,
e.g
., because, in order to,
whenever, as a result, etc.
Check that you have used
these.
Lexical
Resource
I have used a wide range of
vocabulary and made very few,
minor errors in spelling and
language.
Include the important
vocabulary from the diagram.
Use interesting synonyms
and alternative phrases.
Check your spelling.
Grammatical
I have accurately used a
Correct use of the present
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Range and
Accuracy
wide range of grammatical
structures and made none or
very few minor errors.
simple tense.
Appropriate and relevant
use of both active and passive
voices.
Interesting and varied use
of simple and complex
sentences.
Check your use of
grammar and punctuation.
We must leave time to check our writing thoroughly – We can do
this by reading/planning for 2-3 minutes, writing for about 15 minutes, and
checking for 2-3 minutes at the end.
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