Ielts writing Section How To Achieve a target 8 Score (Academic)

Example:
“For instance, last week my boss allowed me to attend my
sisters graduation, which meant a lot to me.”
2.
General example – explain something is a general sense.
Example: 
“For example, in my city, it is very difficult to travel across
the city quickly due to the high levels of traffic.”
 
Here are some examples based on the topic sentences above:
i.
“For instance, my uncle works for a multi-national company and he
receives a pack of 10 discounted movie tickets every two months by taking
public transport.”

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ii.
“For example, my father dislikes change to the extent where he has
worked in the same position in the same company for his entire life, even
though he has been offered several promotions.”
 
iii.
“For example, in my city there is an area where there are many
restaurants where you can eat for under $10, which is not much more if
you were to make dinner at home.”
 
Close/Summary (Optional)
The close/summary part of the supporting paragraph is used to summarize and re-
confirm what your paragraph is about. This part does not need to be long but simply
close the paragraph so the evaluator clearly understands what you have just explained in
the paragraph.
It is very important that if you use a Close/Summary part in your paragraph that you DO
NOT repeat or use the same words.
An easy way to look at how to develop a close/summary is to paraphrase your topic
sentence.
Here are some examples based on the topic sentences above: