This is something else I use with my students a lot. It might also work for you. The
concept is that once you have words, then “ideas” come naturally from those words.
Try thinking of “planning words” and see if it works for you.
Look at these two sample paragraphs from the essay and see how I use simple ideas
1. Giant Pandas arre threatened and will die out (example)
2. Problem with habitat (extended example)
3. Other species have same pattern (explanation of example)
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The opposite view is that it is the responsibilty of mankind to act and try and save
these species for posterity.
There is a moral aspect to this argument because most of
these species are only endangered because of man’s actions and it is our duty to
make amends. Another consideration is that advances in science, especially in the
field of genetics, mean that we may be able to recreate some of their lost habitats. It
is no longer the case that the only option is to preserve these species for future
generations in zoos and botanical gardens.
Notes
You should see that this paragraph follows almost the same model. There is one clear
and simple idea in the first sentence. It relates back to the question words: while
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