Ielts writing Section How To Achieve a target 8 Score (Academic)

i.
“The reason for this is because many people are increasing their
consciousness about the pollution levels of high numbers of cars on the
roads these days. In fact, there are companies which provide incentives
for employees who take public transportation to work as a way to
decrease the pollution levels and subsequent effects on the environment.”
ii.
“Even though many people do not like change, it will always be
inevitable throughout everyone’s life. The group of people who do not like
change tend to avoid it as much as possible by maintaining a position of
comfort. Their decisions are made to avoid the unknown effects of
change by always deciding to continue doing the same thing.”

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iii.
“This is more the case in large cities due to the increasing multi-
cultural diversity of inhabitants. Many large cities have precincts of
restaurants covering all different cuisines and due to this increasing
diversity; many restaurants are having to provide lower cost meals in
order to compete. This competition provides opportunities for more
people to eat out rather than cooking at home.”
Example
Examples are used within the supporting paragraph to provide specific information to
help justify and support your explanation of your idea. IELTS evaluators see the use of
examples as very valuable which means that it is very important that you include
examples in your supporting paragraphs.
T i p : 
It is very important that your examples directly relate to the
description/explanation that you have just written about. This is because the purpose of
the example is to provide specific information which explains your description. If it is
not then it is redundant because it doesn’t support your description.
There are the two ways you can develop easy examples:
1.
Personal example – explain a personal story or event that directly relates
to your reasons