valannar "on-Powers"; lenéme "with-leave". There are no hyphens in L.
ilúvatáren, unglossed. In L, Lowdham was at least able to recognize the genitive ending -en, but he is not here. Interestingly enough, in Adunaic êruvô the ending -vô is here identifiable as it was in L.
ikilyanna "into-chasm". No hyphen in L.
ataltane. "fell down". There is no period after the Quenya word in L. [Note that the shifting of the word ataltane to the right is not found in L which has a different layout. The layout of L and F cannot be readily compared, since we do not have the original typecript but only a reproduction.]
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Kadô
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zigûrun
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zabathân
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unakkha
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...
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and so
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humbled
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he-came
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...
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êruhînim
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dubdam
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ugru-dalad
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...
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ar-
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pharazônun
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azaggara
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avalôiyada
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...
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bârim
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an-adûn
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yurahtam
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dâira
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sâi-
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bêth-mâ
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êruvô
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...
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azrîya
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du-phursâ
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akhâsada
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...
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anadûnê
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zîrân
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hikalba
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...
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bawîba
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dulgî
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...
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balîk
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hazad
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annimru-
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zîr
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azûlada
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...
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eastward
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There is no labeling [B] besides the text. Tolkien must have forgotten to write it in.
ii
[B]
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Agannâlô
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burôda
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nênud
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...
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zâira
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death-shadow
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very heavy
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on us
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longing
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nênud
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...
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adûn
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izindi
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batân
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tâidô
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ayadda:
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îdô
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kâtha
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batîna
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lôkhî.
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it went
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now
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all
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ways (are)
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bent
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[A]
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Vahaiya
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sín
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andóre
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far away
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now (is)
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Andore (Land of Gift)
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This line is identical to its counterpart in L. The only difference is in glossing of andóre: L has simply "Land of Gift".
[B]
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Êphalak
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îdô
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Yôzâyan
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far away
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now
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Gift-Land
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[B]
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Êphal-êphalak
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îdôn
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hi Akallabêth
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far far away
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now
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She that hath fallen
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[A]
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Haiya
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vahaiya
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sín
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atalante.
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far
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far away
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now (is)
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the Downfallen.
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Identical to L in each and every point.
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Works Cited and Recommended
This list contains secondary works only; primary works (texts and books written by J.R.R. Tolkien himself along with commentaries by his son Christopher Tolkien) are not mentioned. The referencing system used here is practically the same as the one used on Ardalambion (http://www.uib.no/People/hnohf/), the Elfling mailing list (http://www.groups.yahoo.com/list/elfling/) and Vinyar Tengwar (in issues up to 40 only). For abbreviations see http://www.elvish.org/elm/abbrev.html.
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