To sum up, obesity is an increasingly worrying issue, affecting both children and adults.
A) Generalizing(reminding the problem one more time)
Unless something is done to reduce the overweight among societies and make them think about their health regularly, people will continue suffering from it.
B) Solution + [if not] negative result
As I see it, governments, parents and employers all have a role in tackling this problem.
D)Final opinion / Suggestion
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